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The life in the school is very dull,because I have no friend.But I'm sure I will be very happy.After class I usually go out in order to get fresh air.I study very hard because I want to catch with my classmates as soon as possible.Great changes have taken place in Shanghai during the past few years.So you should come here .
It's spring now in Shanghai.It's really very beautiful.welcome to Shanghai,Mike.
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