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提问者:creazyrabbit

 状态:本题老师已经讲解 提问时间:2005-3-13 13:40:00 价值50
标题:帮我批改一下作文吧:)

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动物园为了让游客们能和动物有近距离的接触,让游客给动物食物。但有些动物吃了太多生了病,有的动物误食了游客扔的塑料袋,请你给China Daily报社写一封信,谈谈我们应该如何在娱乐的同时,保护好动物。 可能错误百出,老师多劳~ Dear Editor: A few days ago I read a piece of news that makes me think deeply.The news was about four deer's deaths.The four poor deer were died of eating plastic bags that visitors dropped. To let us have a intimate tough with our animals friend,zoos admit us to tough or look animals in a short distance.Also,we can give animals foods.But our behavior sometimes cause bad results.For example,some animals illed for eating to much,even some eaten the plastic bags visitors threw,as your news mentioned. The animal is our best friend.We should build a harmony relationship with them.This will be good not only for animals,but also for people.While the animals in the zoos give us entertainments,we should also protect them ,care them and respect them. Zoos should take measures to prevent any animals dying like the poor deer. Zoos should remind people of not doing anything harmful to animals.And for oursevles,we should take animals as our friends.We can't entertain animals as playing a trick. your sincerely reader,Ann

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