二 、请批改下面二篇作文，并指出问题所在、产生原因及今后如何改正提高。

   1、 书面表达  

           假设你是王军，现在是2001年7月13日晚上。你刚刚从电视传播中得知北京申奥成功，抑制不住内心的激动，提笔给你英国的笔友Paul 写信，介绍申奥成功后北京的情况：

1、听到这个消息后，人们都激动得跳了起来。人们纷纷以唱歌、跳舞、放鞭炮等形式来庆贺这一胜利。现在北京城成了一片欢乐的海洋。

2、北京市政府也宣布了一系列备奥运的措施：包括投入巨资治理环境、整治交通、加强场馆设施建设等。政府还号召广大市民努力学习英语，准备迎接来自世界各地的朋友。

注意：

1、不要逐字翻译，可以根据自己了解的情况可以适当增加细节；

2、词数100左右；

3、格式要正确。

4、参考词汇：

    申办        bid

    鞭炮        firecracker

    环境        environment

    场馆设施    stadiums and sport facilities

 

 

                                           13th July,2001

Dear Paul,

     Today is a special day---- July 13th,2001.I have just heard the news that Beijing had bidden the Olyimpic Games successfully.I can't help jumping for exciting. All the people are gratulating the victory in the form of singing , dancing and firing the firecracker.

     Where there is a will,there is a way.The govement of Beijing have being make great efforts.Take an example, all the people in Beijing are trying their best to study English in order to welcome all the friends coming from all over the world.

     I believe in 2008 the China will give the world "New Beijing,New Olymics."                                                      Best wishes .

                                              Yours,

                                             Wang Jun

 

 

   

   

    2、2001年高考英语试题

   书面表达

   假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。

 

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     周末活动（减负前）               周末活动（减负后）

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  白天：上课、做作业          白天：参观博物馆、学习电脑、绘画等

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  晚上：做作业                晚上：看新闻、读书、看报

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  就寝时间：11：30            就寝时间：10：00

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Dear Dick,

     How nice to hear from you again.As you know,the Chinese students are reducing learning load.We are having great changes.Take a weekend for example,I go to visit museum,study computer , paniting and so on. But in the past.I had to have lessons,do the homework instead.In the evening.Now I can not only read books,and newspaper , but also watch CCTV news,and no homework .At night,I went to bed at 10;00,but before reducing learning load, I couldn't go to bed until 11:30.

     Thank to the reducing leaning load, Our students can have more spare time to develop our interests,can get out of the heavy homework and look at the would.

     In a word,Reducing learning load has does a good deed to the Chinese students.  

      Looking forword very much to seeing you .                                      

                                                Yours truly,

                                                   Li Hua