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 状态:本题老师已经讲解 提问时间:2003-11-15 0:23:00 价值300
标题:SAVE THE EARTH

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                              SAVE THE EARTH 
  We live on the earth ,the earth gives us the air,the water,the fields,the wood and many other necessary things.
The earth gives us every thing ,so we can say it gives us lives.It’s our mother.
  We love our mother,we love our earth.So we must keep the earth healthy .You know ,the earth is healty, the people are healthy.But now the earth are too dirty.It can make the earth ill.
  Look!The water in many rivers are not clean.There are many dirty things.Many kinds of fishes killed by the dirty water.We don’t have enough water to drink ,to water the fields.The air make people sick.The air in someplace smells too bad.People usually have a breathing illness there.The sky isn’t blue,it’s brown.We can’t see the sun.We can’t feel the sunshine.Many forests are lost.So many birds lost their homes.I think if people hag the trees all along,it would be no green plants on the earth after 100 years.If there’s no green plants,there’s no oxygen on the earth.Can we live?No, we can’t.If we often kill the animals,there is not any animals. The living things line will broken.When that time,every thing is going to die.
  So we must put them right.Let’s protect the circumstance,save the earth,save ourselves.

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